The Wonderful Wizard of Oz, Reviewed by My Son (Age 6)
My son Jackson and I just finished reading The Wonderful Wizard of Oz, so I asked if he’d do a review I could share with my readers here. I asked some questions to help him along, but everything that follows (except my italicized comments) is his own words.
There are spoilers, but given that the book is more than a century old, I’m not going to worry about putting anything behind a cut.
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The Wonderful Wizard of Oz is about a girl named Dorothy who is carried by a tornado to the land of Oz and then meets a Scarecrow, a Cowardly Lion, and a Tin Woodman, and kills both the wicked witches. And then she has to get back to Kansas but it turns out that the Wizard of Oz, he isn’t even a wizard! He’s just a humbug who was carried by a balloon when he was a balloonist.
What I don’t like is that the winged monkeys didn’t give a second chance to Dorothy (the second time she summoned them) since they couldn’t go out of the Land of Oz. (Jackson is big on fairness.) And I don’t like the Hammer-head Slinky-neck guys, when they had to use their last time to call the monkeys. And I don’t like when the silver shoes come off in the desert, because then Dorothy can’t see Oz again!
Here’s what I did like. Okay, I like that they made the Lion the king of the beasts and I also like that the Wicked Witch that they were going to kill had all those guys, because then I found out that there were black bees! I liked the black bees because I used to not know that there were such things as black bees and now I found out.
I liked at the ending that Dorothy’s companions came to rule over them. The lion ruled over the beasts after he killed the spider thing, and the Scarecrow ruled over the land of Oz, and the Tin Woodman ruled over the Winkies.
There’s only one thing that surprised me — that the Hammer-Heads could shoot their heads out with their necks; they had Slinky-necks!
Oz helped me go to sleep because then I had other things to think about and see in my mind instead of scary things so I didn’t wake up and have to open my eyes … ! . (Punctuation dictated by Jackson.)
I like the book and the movie both, because in the book there were surprise chapters, and in the movie they gave her ruby slippers, and I liked the ruby slippers better than silver shoes.
I think everybody should read this book because it’s really fun.
Anita K.
May 21, 2011 @ 5:56 pm
What an excellent review! Had you not specified, I would have thought it was by a much older child, probably 10-12 range, based on other student age writing I’ve seen. Sounds like he had an excellent grasp of both the story arc as a whole and detailed specific events and characters, which is a balance I don’t remember my own classmates showing very often. (This really made me want to re-read the book, he makes it sound quite a bit more exciting than I would have remembered!)
sara g
May 21, 2011 @ 6:33 pm
Dorothy has many more adventures in OZ. I hope he may enjoy some of them.
Kate Shaw
May 21, 2011 @ 6:35 pm
A brilliant and detailed review! I especially love his comment about the black bees. 🙂
Melissa Mead
May 21, 2011 @ 6:44 pm
He’s really only 6?
I’d forgotten about those creepy Hammerheads…
Does he know that Dorothy DOES go back? 🙂
Michael Cannon
May 21, 2011 @ 7:00 pm
Wait… what six year old says “humbug?”
Jim C. Hines
May 21, 2011 @ 7:04 pm
“Humbug” is the word they use in the book 🙂
Jim C. Hines
May 21, 2011 @ 7:04 pm
He doesn’t know yet, but he’ll find out 🙂
Lizz Reigle
May 21, 2011 @ 7:08 pm
Well that is a mighty impressive review. Well done! Very eloquently written.
David Y
May 21, 2011 @ 9:46 pm
If Jackson doesn’t read your blog …
I think I started with the 3rd book (Ozma of Oz) when I was about his age. The second book can be a bit upsetting/offputting to boys because (spoiler!) the hero urns into a girl.
Jim C. Hines
May 21, 2011 @ 9:55 pm
I don’t think that would bother him. (And no, neither of my kids read the blog … which is probably a good thing 🙂 )
Jim C. Hines
May 21, 2011 @ 10:42 pm
I asked him some questions and put those together for the review, but the memory is all him. I wish I remembered things half as well as he does…
Kevin Hogan
May 22, 2011 @ 9:03 pm
Yep, I read the second book in 3rd grade, and never read another Oz book again.
(At least, I assume it was the second book. All I remember anymore is that the hero turned into a girl.)
Cy
May 23, 2011 @ 4:42 pm
Yarrrrg, that was so cute! XD Thank you for posting your son’s review here–it’s kind of fascinating to see exactly how a small child perceives and interprets a story like this. And like everyone else, may I compliment your undoubtedly fine fatherly skills in raising such a literate and coherent 6-year-old? 🙂 Maybe I’m underestimating 6-year-olds in general (since I don’t have much exposure to them, I guess I really wouldn’t know ^^; ), but he sounds very bright to me!
Jim C. Hines
May 24, 2011 @ 7:57 am
Thanks! He’s a smart kid, with a very good memory 🙂